Stuart's Daily Word Spot: Ice

on Friday, September 30, 2011

Ice: noun - frozen water, which is a brittle translucent crystalline solid; a body of such frozen water; the sheet or layer of ice on a pond, river, etc; figuratively – a lack of warm feeling, cold-heartedness, deep reserve; an ice cream; the icing on a cake; diamonds and other jewellery (slang); the profit made from illegal sales of theatre or cinema tickets (US slang); protection money (slang).

'Donald took his vanilla ice onto the frozen puddle, which was now solid and allowed him to skate on the surface of ice.'

'When Gordon made his suggestion to her, Deidre replied with a glance that exposed the ice in her heart and he knew he'd spend the night in the guest room again.'

'Marylyn counted the crystals of ice that poured from the soft leather bag, handed her by her aged but hideously rich admirer, before she calculated how she'd reward him.'

Pic: Bridlington Bay.

Stuart's Daily Word Spot: Habitual


Habitual: adjective - inherent or latent in the mental constitution; of the nature of or fixed by a habit; constantly repeated or continued; customary; given to a specific habit; usual, constant, continual.

'Jennifer wore her habitual gown of gossamer over skin that was tanned by habitual worship of the sun.'

'Long custom, combined with ignorance, intolerance and prejudicial fear made the torture and demonization of pagan women habitual at the hands of the religious authorities.'

30 September 1861 William Wrigley, who founded Wrigley’s Chewing Gum Company, was born. Those who blame the producer for the sins of the users might wish to curse him for the sticky mess his products leave on our streets and elsewhere.

Pic: The beck at Staithes, North Yorkshire.

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Author Interview with Jeff Horton.

on Thursday, September 29, 2011

Hello Jeff, please tell us about you, as a writer.

Well, I started writing several years ago, when I was at the point in my life that I wanted to reinvent myself. I started putting one word in front of enough until a novel appeared.
I enjoy writing a variety of fiction, ranging from pre and post-apocalyptic stories, to children's stories and cyber-warfare. The Great Collapse-Survivors of the Pulse, which came out in 2010, was the first in the Survivors of the Pulse series, a story about the collapse of civilization when electricity is lost across the planet, permanently. The series concludes in The Dark Age-Survivors of the Pulse, which is set five-hundred years in the future, when men once more depend on swords, bows, and arrows to survive. My last novel, The Last Prophet, is a fictional story based on the book of Revelation in the Bible, and is written in the first person from the perspective of the prophet.
 
Your latest books are The Dark Age and The Last Prophet; perhaps you’d you give us some insight into it in a few sentences?

The Dark Age and The Last Prophet were released within two weeks of one another. The Dark Age is a post-apocalyptic novel in which humanity struggles to rebuild civilization and break free from five-hundreds of darkness. The Last Prophet is a story set at the end of days, when a man named John March, is called to proclaim that the end of the world is at hand, and to warn mankind about the Beast.

How did you come to write this particular book?

Although it was the second of my three novels to be published, The Dark Age was written first. I've always wondered what we humanity would do without it's vast and increasingly complex technology. In The Dark Age, not only must humanity live without modern technology, they must live without the benefit of thousands of years of ancient technology as well, since it was also lost when civilization fell apart during The Great Collapse.
In regards to The Last Prophet, I have always wanted to write a book based on the book of Revelation. There is such rich imagery and fantastic characters that I felt it was worth writing another novel about. This time however, I wrote it from the perspective of the prophet, a weak and fallible man who, like the rest of us, is riddled with self-doubt.

Do you have a favourite character from the book? If so, who and why this particular one?

I have several characters I really like in each book. My favorite character in The Dark Age would probably be the protagonist, Ferrell Young, and the antagonist, Kraken. The story would not be quite what it is without either.
With The Last Prophet, I'd have to say that one of myfavorite characters was the wife of John March, Lara. She was always supportive of her husband throughout his journey, and demonstrates just how strong she is when he dies.

Where can people buy your books?

The Dark Age and The Last Prophet are available from the publisher, Amazon, and most major bookstores.

What qualities does a writer need to be successful?

I think there are three qualities that a writer must possess to be successful; imagination, belief in oneself, and a thick skin. First, a novelist must have an imagination that create a world replete with fictitious places, people, and events. Second, a writer must be confident enough and believe in oneself enough to carry them through when naysayers, including those closest to them, try to dissuade them (often with good intentions), from pursuing their dream of a writing career. Lastly, a successful writer must be thick-skinned enough that when their work is slammed by critics (which it will be), they do not fold and abandon their dream.

What’s your working method?

I tend to start with a rough idea of a story. Then, as I write more the plot and the characters begin to develop. Then I start to develop more of a formal outline that helps build more structure for the remainder of the book.

What’s the single biggest mistake made by beginner writers?

I don't honestly know. From my own mistakes, I can say that I was way too naïve about the challenges around getting published. I was even more naïve about the amount of marketing that would be necessary to sell books. Like many others, I'm still waiting to see how successful my efforts will be.

To what extent are grammar and spelling important in writing?

I look like grammar and spelling as necessary evils. They have little to do with developing and telling an exciting story, but you cannot do so without them. While they do not make a book a bestseller, poor spelling and grammar certainly can sink one.

How much do you revise your MS before sending it off?

At first it was nowhere nearly as polished as it should have been. Now, I try to get it as polished as I can before sending it in. It's a lot easier to make changes before it enters the editing process.

As a writer of Christian fiction, to what extent do you think genre is useful in the publishing world?

      I think the genre is far too underappreciated. I believe that human beings seem to have an innate interest in the supernatural, but I believe that the market has been saturated with the Twilights and Harry Potters for the last five to ten years.
      Regardless, I believe that if I can write good, quality, entertaining Christian fiction, there is a huge market for it.

Many authors see marketing as a bind. What's your opinion on this, and how do you deal with it?

I can certainly understand and appreciate that many authors don’t like the marketing side and to be honest, I'm not sure we are the most qualified. Until we achieve some substantial recognition however, it is up to us or the publisher to market the author and the book.

What sort of displacement activities keep you from writing?

My day job. For the time being, I do most of my writing at night and on weekends.

What support, if any, do you receive from family and friends, writing group, or dedicated professionals?

My family and friends have been very important, particularly when I first launched my writing career. I continue to have significant support from both, which I appreciate very much.       

Is presentation of the MS as important as agents and publishers suggest?

Absolutely. As with grammar and spelling, it doesn’t make the book successful, it keep it from getting published.

How long does it take you to write a novel?

That largely depends on how much time I have available to put into it. Typically it takes from six months to a year.

Who or what inspires your writing?

God, Life, both…I don't really know for sure. Subject matter that I am either familiar with or have an interest in is important.

If there’s a single aspect of writing you find frustrating, what is it?

With me it's the dotting of the "i" and the crossing of the "t" that comes once the rough draft is finished that is the most frustrating, that and the marketing.

Is there a particular feature of writing that you really enjoy?

I really enjoy the pure creativity of the writing process. As an author, I get to create a world, populate it with people and places, what could be more fun then that?

Do you believe creative writing is a natural gift or an acquired skill?

Both. While people are sometimes born with an innate creativity, it takes time and practice to develop as an artist.

What are you writing now?

My current project is children's novel, a mixture of Chronicles of Narnia, Pilgrim's Progress, and science-fiction.

Do you have a website or blog where readers can visit?

Yes. I am listing them below.
         Author Jeff Horton's website-            www.hortonlibrary.com
         Goodreads-     http://www.goodreads.com/author/show/4478744.Jeff_W_Horton
         Facebook-       http://www.facebook.com/Author.Jeff.Horton

Given unlimited resources, where would you do your writing?

Sometimes outside by the pool, sometimes on a yacht, other times in a quiet study.

Where do you actually write?

  
In my living room, believe it or not. 

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Stuart's Daily Word Spot: Then or than?


Then or than?

Although it's quite common for these two to be confused, it's one of those that is simple to resolve.
'Then' has to do with the passage of time, or with a sequence of events.
'Than' is a comparative conjunction, allowing one thing to be compared with another.

So:

'Sarah went to see her mother, then travelled the short distance to see her brother, and then she went to the supermarket and met the man of her dreams over the cheese counter.'

'Sarah has more than one sister; in fact, she has three.'

'If you don't stop that, Bernard, then I'll slap your face.' (though, in fact, the 'then' in this sentence is redundant – try it without and you'll see there's no loss of meaning. But it illustrates the point, I think.)

'I'd rather you kissed me than slapped my face.'

Pic: Suspension bridge over the Humber Estuary.

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Stuart's Daily Word Spot: Gadabout

on Wednesday, September 28, 2011

Gadabout: adjective - Gadding, roving.  noun - someone who gads about.

'That Bryan has a right gadabout eye; always looking over the talent as the girls come into the club.'

'Young Shiela's a real gadabout; roams all over the place like a nomad.'

Pic: Sunset over Sissi harbour, Crete.

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Stuart's Daily Word Spot: That or which?

on Tuesday, September 27, 2011
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That or which?
Much has been said and written about the usage of these two words and I could spend paragraphs in explanation. However, for most purposes the following illustration should suffice. I'll refer you to Fowler or your favourite grammarian for a more detailed exposition.

'That' is used in a restrictive sense; i.e. it identifies one object among many, pointing out the item that has a specific characteristic. So, 'A mini-skirtthat is short…' tells the reader that you are referring to the one skirt, amongst the many, that is notable because of its lack of length. It's probably worth pointing out here that there is no comma dividing the object from the description.

'Which', however, is used in a non-restrictive way; i.e. it points to a single item possessing the specified quality. So, 'A mini-skirt, which is short…' tells the reader that the skirt is short, without comparing it to any other. Note also that the object and its description are separated by a comma.

So, to enlarge on the examples in a way that will hopefully illustrate the point more fully:

'A mini-skirt that is short is bound to draw more male eyes than a mini-skirt of normal length.'

'A mini-skirt, which is always short, will cover very little of the legs.'

In the first example, if the words 'that is short' are excluded the sentence has a different meaning. The restrictive clause 'that is short' is crucial to the real meaning of the sentence.
But, in the second example, if the words 'which is always short' are missed out, the sentence means the same thing. The non-restrictive clause'which is always short' merely adds a bit of information to the sentence without altering its meaning.

Probably, therefore, the easiest way to remember when to use 'that and when 'which' is more appropriate, is to decide whether you could ditch the clause. You can ditch the 'which' but lose the 'that' and you'll look a prat.

27 September 1988 I married my wonderful wife, Valerie. We've been very happy ever since.
27 September 1981 The first TGV high speed train journey took place in France.

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Stuart's Daily Word Spot: Fabulous

on Monday, September 26, 2011
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Fabulous: adjective - of the nature of a fable; full of fables; unhistorical; known via fable; like a fable, absurd; found only in fable; astonishing; excellent, marvellous or terrific; of alleged existences or facts - belonging to fable, legendary;  of doctrines or ideas - based on fable;  celebrated through fable.

'The Beatles were referred to as the Fab Four in their early days as a supergroup; their rise to fame and fortune as fabulous as any myth or fairy tale you care to name.'

'Polly sauntered along the beach in her almost bikini, male eyes admiring her fabulous looks as she passed.'

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Stuart's Daily Word Spot: Stationary or stationery?

on Sunday, September 25, 2011
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Stationary or stationery?

This is a very old dilemma with a particularly simple solution.

Since 'stationery' is the stuff you use for writing etc, you only need remember that 'stationery' with an 'e' includes envelopes.

On the other hand, 'stationary' means to remain still so just remember that if you halt, you'll be 'stationary.'

There, that was easy, wasn't it?


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Stuart's Daily Word Spot: Earnest

on Saturday, September 24, 2011
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Earnest: adjective – with serious intent, not trifling, ardent, intense, zealous; as a result of or a display of sincere conviction; weighty or important.

'Colin was so earnest in his pursuit of philately that one would think his life depended on his search for new stamps.'


24 September 1936 Jim Henson, the creator of the Muppets, was born – and one of his characters was, of course, called 'Earnie', a diminutive of 'Earnest'.

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Stuart's Daily Word Spot: Ebisu

on Friday, September 23, 2011
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Ebisu: this is another of my occasional reminders that there are many different gods worshipped on this strange but wonderful planet we inhabit. Ebisu is a Japanese god in the Shintotradition. A fat and smiling deity with a beard, he is generally depicted with a fishing rod in one hand and sea bream in the other. He's considered a god of luck and has been worshipped since ancient times, especially by fishermen. More recently, he's become associated with profit and his picture adorns the many commercial premises. Because he's deaf, apparently, he doesn't join the rest of the gods for the October festival held at Izumo, which seems to be another instance of the peculiar prejudices surrounding so many religious figures. 

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Daily Cheap Reads

This is a website that selects and promotes good books selling at reasonable prices. If you're looking for a good read that won't cost you a fortune, this is the place to look. This week, they featured Breaking Faith. The link to the site is here:  http://dailycheapreads.co.uk/page/2/

Author Interview with Sandra McLeod Humphrey

on Thursday, September 22, 2011

Sandra McLeod Humphrey is a retired clinical psychologist, a character education consultant, and an award-winning author of seven middle-grade and young adult books. She’s also the recipient of the National Character Education Center’s Award for Exemplary Leadership in Ethics Education (2000) and the 2005 Helen Keating Ott Award for Outstanding Contribution to Children's Literature. In her words: “After working as a clinical psychologist for more than 31 years, I consider my new writing career as the ‘desssert’ of my life!”

Your latest book is Hot Issues, Cool Choices: Facing Bullies, Peer Pressure, Popularity, and Put-Downs; perhaps you’d you give us some insight into it in a few sentences and let us know how you came to write it?

Hot Issues, Cool Choices: Facing Bullies, Peer Pressure, Popularity, and Put-Downs was a book I had to write. After doing school visits for two years and hearing the personal stories the students told me about their bullying experiences, I knew I had to share those stories with my readers. The stories are fictionalized to some extent, but they are all based on true bullying experiences, and the book is dedicated to a 12-year-old boy who took his own life as a result of being bullied.

Do you have a favourite character from the book? If so, who and why this particular one?

One of my favorite stories from the book is the one written by a bully himself who is totally clueless as to how others perceive him. He does not see himself as a bully and uses all kinds of rationalizations to excuse his bullying behavior.

Where can people buy your books?

My books are available at all major bookstores, both offline and online, and if people would like an autographed copy of one of my books, they can order one from my website http://www.kidscandoit.com.

What qualities does a writer need to be successful?

For a writer to be successful, one most definitely needs perseverance and a passion to write. It has been said that a writer can not “not write” and I totally agree. Everywhere I go and with everything I see, I think in terms of “story.” What kind of story is told here and by whom? Even when I’m sitting in the waiting room at a doctor’s office, I sometimes entertain myself by making up a story about each of the other people in the waiting room.

What’s your working method?

My working method is actually pretty simple. I’m a morning person, so I write in the mornings and do my busywork in the afternoons or evenings when I’m pretty much “brain-dead.” I usually set a potentially attainable goal each day (on paper), so that at the end of the day, I can cross it off. I’m a “list person” and I love to make lists, just so I can cross everything off at the end of the day!

What’s the single biggest mistake made by beginner writers?

I think one of the mistakes beginning writers may make is to not read enough. To be a writer, one must READ, READ, READ, particularly in their genre. Another common mistake is insufficient market research before they send their manuscripts off to the publishers. There are some great marketing resources available, and the editors will know if you’ve done your homework.

To what extent are grammar and spelling important in writing?

I may be in the minority, but personally, I think grammar and spelling are extremely important. They show that “you care enough to send the very best!”

How much do you revise your MS before sending it off?

I revise and revise and then I revise some more. I also give my manuscripts a “cooling off” period of a few days (or weeks), so that I can look at them with fresh eyes the way a potential reader would be looking at them.

As a writer, to what extent do you think genre is useful in the publishing world?

Actually, I think genre is quite important—particularly when it comes to differentiating M-G novels from YA novels and from differentiating the various types of fantasy and sci-fi novels.

Many authors see marketing as a bind. What's your opinion on this, and how do you deal with it?

I’m not sure what you mean by “bind,” but I see marketing simply as one of those things I have to do as a writer. This means checking out potential prepublication endorsers, potential reviewers, appropriate book awards, etc. There are always marketing “surprises” one never anticipates such as the Boston middle school which ordered 900 copies of one of my books to use in their pen pal program with their community leaders. Who could ever have predicted that one?

What sort of displacement activities keep you from writing?

I actually do a lot of work with our youth as a Sunday school teacher, Vacation Bible School teacher, confirmation mentor, school visits, young writers’ workshops, etc., but there’s most definitely an upside to all my youth activities because the time I spend with our youth gives me great material for my books.

What support, if any, do you receive from family and friends, writing group, or dedicated professionals?

Everywhere I go, I get support! My social networking friends on the internet, my friends in the real world, and especially my husband (who never complains about the endless hours I spend on the computer) all give me very much appreciated support!

Is presentation of the MS as important as agents and publishers suggest?

I think presentation is extremely important! That first line, that first paragraph, that first page all make an impression! Your format, your grammar, your spelling, your typos, your “voice,” your writing style, your storyline, your characterization etc. will all be revealed by the end of the first chapter.

How long does it take you to write a book?

I’m usually working on two books simultaneously, and it generally takes me about two years to complete both books.

Who or what inspires your writing?

People and social issues inspire my writing. The problem of school bullying inspired my bullying book, the questions my confirmation students asked inspired my Keepin’ It Real: A Young Teen Talks with God, my Sunday school classes inspired my Me, Myself, and I: Youth Meditations for Grades Five through Eight, my thirty-one years as a clinical psychologist inspired my What Would You Do? series and my new book The No-Name Club’s Not-So-Official Guide to Solving Your Problems(Royal Fireworks 11/11), and my ongoing passion to encourage our youth to believe in themselves inspired my Dare to Dream!: 25 Extraordinary Lives and my new book They Stood Alone!: 25 Men and Women Who Made a Difference(Prometheus Books 11/11).

If there’s a single aspect of writing you find frustrating, what is it?

The only area of writing I find frustrating is that I have so many ideas for so many books I want to write, and I know that I won’t be around long enough to write them all!

Is there a particular feature of writing that you really enjoy?

My passion is to inspire our youth to develop strong character, to believe in themselves, and to dream dreams (their own dreams), and every time I receive letters or e-mails from my readers who tell me how much one of my books has helped them, that is most definitely a “peak experience” for me.

Do you believe creative writing is a natural gift or an acquired skill?

I think creative writing is a combination of both native ability and acquired skill. To be a successful writer, I think you need both.

What are you writing now?

I’m currently working on Failure Isn’t Final!: 25 Men and Women Who Never Gave Up, and as with all my other books, I’m writing it to inspire our youth to persevere, to believe in themselves and their dreams, and to never give up!

Do you have a website or blog where readers can visit?

You can learn more about my books by visiting my Web site at www.kidscandoit.com. and my blog at http://www.kidscandoit.com/blog/

Given unlimited resources, where would you do your writing?

If I had unlimited resources, I think I’d have a beach hideaway on some Hawaiian island with my four dogs (350 pounds of “dog”) and enough electricity for my computer and my printer. (My husband can come, too).

Where do you actually write?

I write at my computer in my study. Actually, it’s my husband’s study because his study has better light than mine, and every time he comes in or goes out, I have to stop typing and move my chair because my chair blocks the doorway. I’m thinking that Hawaiian island is looking better all the time!

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Stuart's Daily Word Spot: Since or because?

on Wednesday, September 21, 2011
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Since or because?
Since: adverb – then, immediately after; from the specified time until now; at a time between that time and now or that time and the time under consideration; ago, before: conjunction - from the time that; during or in the time subsequent; from the time in the past when; up to the present time or the time being considered from the time in the past; the time when; when; because, seeing that.

Because: adverb - for the reason that; by reason of, on account of: conjunction- for the reason that, inasmuch as, since; can also be used elliptically in answer to a question, implying that a full response has been withheld; in order that, with the purpose that.

Whilst these terms can be and, indeed, often are used as if interchangeable, in writing it's probably best to stick to 'since' only when referring to time and to use 'because' to establish causality. When 'since' is used to suggest cause it may make your reader to stop to consider its meaning. Such pause for thought is not often something you'd want to encourage.

'Because Frances wanted the company of more than one animal in her home, she filled the place with cats, dogs, rabbits and even a rather ancient and mangy donkey she'd discovered wandering the streets.'

'Since Sandra stopped shopping sequentially, she sought some significant substitute.'  This is poor, as the reader doesn't know whether the cessation of shopping was responsible for Sandra's search or whether she merely decided to seek something different once she'd finished her shopping.

'Because Sandra stopped….' Is a much clearer way of stating the former, I think; though it lacks the alliteration, of course.

'Since mankind wandered out of Africa and set up shop over the various continents of the world, the search for commodities to buy has grown continuously.'  Here, it's clear that we're referring to the passage of time between the exodus and the present day.

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Stuart's Daily Word Spot: Deism

on Tuesday, September 20, 2011

Deism: noun - a doctrine or belief employed by deists; a belief in a creator God who doesn't intervene in the universe; natural religion.

'As an adherent of deism, Ruth considered the world a place of wondrous divine creation in which her fate was neither predetermined nor governed in any other way by her God.'

Pic: A summer sky.

Stuart's Daily Word Spot: Sensual or sensuous?

on Monday, September 19, 2011
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Sensual or sensuous? 
Sensual: adjective- concerning the senses or sensation, sensory; depending only on the senses and not the spirit or intellect; appealing to or involving appetites or desires; carnal, fleshly, lewd, depraved; immersed in material or temporal matters rather than intellectual and spiritual interests; worldly; excessively devoted to physical pleasure or gratification of the senses; self-indulgent sexually, or with food and drink.

Sensuous: adjective- concerning the senses or sensation; derived from or affecting the senses; affecting the senses aesthetically rather than sensually; readily affected by the senses, keenly responsive to the pleasures of sensation.

Traditionally, the distinction between 'sensuous' and 'sensual' makes 'sensuous' a more neutral term with the meaning of 'concerning the senses rather than the intellect', while 'sensual' relates to gratification of the senses, especially those of a sexual nature.

Although the words, like so many of these difficult pairings, are more or less interchangeable, general usage suggests that 'sensual' be used for sexual or erotic matters, and 'sensuous' be employed more neutrally for those things that provide pleasurable sensations of a more general sort.

'Eileen, a sensual creature, who loved the feel of other skin on her own, was always seeking a mate with whom she could experience all the wonders of sex.'

'George blamed the size of his belly and the girth of his waist entirely on the sensuous pleasures of eating foods that filled his palate with delight and treated his mouth to many varied textures and tastes.'

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Mementoes of Mai, by Helmy Kusuma, Reviewed.


Written by a writer for whom English is not his first language, this novelette reads rather like a piece of autobiography. Although Helmy is writing in a language which is not his native tongue, he has a better grasp of idiom, grammar, spelling and sentence structure than a lot of indie authors who claim English as their mother tongue. That's not to say there are no errors; there are slips in tense, structure and word order. There are occasional odd characters (textual rather than fictional) scattered amongst the words, suggesting that the conversion from a PC document to the format needed for an ebook has not been totally successful. But I'm nit-picking. The story has a charm and innocence about it that drove me to finish the book in spite of its slight deficiencies. It is a coming of age tale, a story of personal enlightenment and epiphany.
Some of the language borders on the poetic and Helmy paints word pictures that are both evocative and instructive. I feel I now know a great deal more about his homeland and those places he visits in the pursuance of his dream, and, more importantly, my wish to visit these places has grown stronger.
The philosophical asides chime well with the narrative and rarely come across as author intrusion, since they seem to come naturally from the mouth of the viewpoint narrator.
I enjoyed this story. It is a good book in search of an English speaking editor to make it into a very good book. But, even as it stands, I can recommend it as a gentle and feelgood read.

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Stuart's Daily Word Spot: Cable

on Sunday, September 18, 2011
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Cable: noun - a thick and strong rope made from hemp or wire; in nautical usage – a strong rope attached to an anchor; a cable length is 200 yards; a length of insulated wire or wires, sheathed in protective casing, used to carry electric signals and/or electric power; a cablegram; cable TV; system of transmitting television signals by cable.

'Mick received a cable that suggested he remove the cable TV he'd illegally installed in his house by feeding a cable through to his own set from his neighbour's receiver.'


19 September 1911 One of my writing heroes, William Golding was born.

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Stuart's Daily Word Spot: Regrettably or regretfully?

on Saturday, September 17, 2011

Regrettably or regretfully? 
Regrettably: adjective - undesirable, unwelcome, deserving censure; something deserving or worthy of regret.

Regretfully: adjective - Feeling or showing regret.

Something that is 'regrettable' is something undesirable or unfortunate.
If, on the other hand, someone is 'regretful', they are full of regret and wish they had not done or said whatever initiated the regret.

So:

'Nancy's overindulgence in alcohol, which caused her to perform a spectacular striptease on the top table at her sister's wedding, was regrettable, especially since the groom posted a video of the event on Youtube.'

'Nancy was regretful that she'd allowed too much alcohol to influence her into performing a humiliating strip before all the guests at her sister's wedding, especially when the groom, who she was trying to impress, exposed her to the world by posting a video online.'

Pic: The sea front at Staithes, North Yorkshire.

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Reading A Writer’s Mind: Exploring Short Fiction – First Thought to Finished Story


Reading A Writer’s Mind: Exploring Short Fiction – First Thought to Finished Story
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S.A. Linda Acaster is a writer whose name long-standing readers of this blog will recognise for the diverse range of her fiction. But she has another life…


L.A. Ho-ho… I have several actually, but this one began many years ago when I was better known for my short fiction. A creative writing tutor at a local Adult Education establishment asked if I’d mind stepping in while she visited her sister in Australia. The gig was two hours a week for five weeks.

Those five weeks turned into three years, and along the way I found I laid bare the mechanics of my own creative process. A stint with a distance learning college tutoring creative writing courses honed my explanatory skills on the page, and a host of how-to articles on the techniques of writing fiction followed in the writing press both in the UK and the USA. It is this experience that has been distilled into Reading A Writer’s Mind: Exploring Short Fiction – First Thought to Finished Story.

I’ve never been a writer who wrote in one style, in one genre, using one method of delivery, and this became key to the format of the book. Taking ten stories, I lead the reader from the initial idea trigger, through the story itself, to an in-depth commentary covering the options considered and the decisions made during the writing. The stories were chosen to highlight particular techniques within a specific genre, for instance:

* Lyrical narrative v terse dialogue; using tone as a descriptive tool (Mainstream)
* A calendar structure using the Tell technique (Women’s Fiction)
* Working with parallel storylines via past and present tense (SF)

There are suggestions for experimenting with each set of techniques discussed, and the book wraps up with a section on common editing concerns. Like this blogpost, I use an accessible, chatty style and pull no punches about rewrites and the problems I faced. I aim for my experience to feed into your fiction.

Other books focusing on aspects of writing fiction are in the pipeline, each under the banner Reading A Writer’s Mind.

For the rest of September Reading A Writer’s Mind: Exploring Short Fiction – First Thought to Finished Story is on a launch offer:

Smashwordsfor I-Pad, Nook, Sony, Kindle, etc, use the 66% discount code BN46H at checkout.

For more information on all Linda Acaster’s work:
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For my review of this excellent volume see http://stuartaken.blogspot.com/2011/09/review-of-reading-writers-mind.html  It's just a short scroll down this page!

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